tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13421295.post115723471243568504..comments2023-10-31T05:07:24.826-07:00Comments on Fishing In A Dry Wash: Savings AccountKingfisherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13207427729752082984noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13421295.post-1158179765674544602006-09-13T13:36:00.000-07:002006-09-13T13:36:00.000-07:00Methinks yer monkey and mine trained at the same c...Methinks yer monkey and mine trained at the same camp...Rickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03352610368331335597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13421295.post-1158178331378166762006-09-13T13:12:00.000-07:002006-09-13T13:12:00.000-07:00Vividly disturbing. For me the wrap up worked/help...Vividly disturbing. For me the wrap up worked/helped. I think it would have been clear enough without it.<BR/><BR/>Goosebumps--eerily close to home.Middle Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12334580430376973159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13421295.post-1157363405306678812006-09-04T02:50:00.000-07:002006-09-04T02:50:00.000-07:00I've already spent my quotia of "awesome" on TGIUT...I've already spent my quotia of "awesome" on TGIUTK's entry. Still, what more to say?<BR/><BR/>I agree with TIFF to a point. But the ultimate meaning would be lost without the last sentence.KOMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00801562785410076164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13421295.post-1157324013265929872006-09-03T15:53:00.000-07:002006-09-03T15:53:00.000-07:00Sweet hopping baby jeebus, how did you get THIS fr...Sweet hopping baby jeebus, how did you get THIS from THAT picture?<BR/><BR/>I'm pretty darned glad we decided to NOT pick winners.<BR/><BR/>OK - for a moment I was confused by the coins vs papers thing, but on second reading figured it out. I really like how she can read people's thoughts and feelings, and use that against the ones she knows she hates. I also like the "slips of paper" becoming money. <BR/><BR/>My only suggestion would be that you leave the story off with the first sentence of the last paragraph. Your readers can fill in the blanks of the last 2.tiffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01351692108818152561noreply@blogger.com